The Multiple Person Complex :: Writing Education Teaching Essays

The Multiple Person ComplexWell, I am embarrassed to admit this, but the assignment of the eachegory for life at a university was not something I worked very hard to write. Even to a greater extent embarrassing is that it is clear when you read my paper. When I look back on it, I dont see a fiction at all. A relation? Yes. But theres no metaphor in my paper. That proves to me, and everyone in the class, that I didnt frame in a lot of thinking into my writing. So I provoke to expend up myself why a paper that was easy enough to write could have turned out so wrong. I think that I sincerely yours int terminate to use a jigsaw puzzle as a metaphor for my experiences of life at Bemidji State University. But as I wrote the paper, I remember feeling removed from the project and the contents. I was just now creating in to hand in. So I started with an object I could use for a metaphor, the puzzle, then just wrote out a simple comparison. I didnt even think about it not being a met aphor until I got it back a couple of days ago. It wasnt at all how I viewed life at the college. It was simply easier to do, than to explain way I really felt, like some strange force just keeps push me through school, and that I dont feel comfortable with the idea of what my education go forth bring me, or wont bring me. Instead of putting my real experiences on the paper with my real voice pulling the reader into my paper, I ended up with a dull, simple paper that didnt even fulfill the assignment.The difference between me as the writer and the me portrayed in my papers is evident in my paper Thoughts on Organization. I was very unsure of how to do the assignment, so I followed Marnies advice and just started writing as things came to me. I wrote my thoughts as they occurred, basically. My little quirky comments are very true to my personality. In the metaphor paper I didnt use any of them. In fact, I purposely kept them out, thinking they had no place in a paper or essay. (Ho w very institutionally OS of me, huh?) The reason I put the into other papers, is because I worked really hard on the, gave them presbyopic consideration, and wrote them with me as the character in them.